[Chat thread] Cung chúc tân xuân 2024

[nhinhonhinho]

^ equipment là chỉ chung trang bị rồi thì cần gì phải thêm 's'

It can fire either single shots or "burst" ???

bust fire là bắn theo loạt ngắn đấy.

BTW post lại cái descr của con thứ 2 cho quý Scipio :P

Navi Name: Commandman.EXE

Navi Quote:
-None can rival my sword!
-WAKE UP Kiyatam-kun (screaming)!
-I told you not to cause trouble isn’t it!?

Navi Type: Light

Navi Sex: Male

Navi Appearance: A medium size navi, tough and muscular. Wear a golden Roman’s style armor which covered his chest, his jumpsuit is black. His helmet also has a Roman’s style with tall red feathered ridge at the center, the front pad of the ridge homed his control center and radar to command viruses. The front pad of the helmet spotted another rectangular pad which is a signal catcher like any other navi (vital for any navi since it help them to contact with the other and operator). He also wears red coat which can somewhat reduce impact of coming strikes. Commandman is equipped with air-shoes to enhance his mobility.
-Hair: dark and short. Have 2 sticks hair poked out at the end of his helmet.
-Eyes: emerald green eyes. Turn red when anger.
-Symbol: image.

Navi personality: Commandman is Kiyatam's best friend, able to share bond, feeling and harmony with his operator. He has many trails of knight: chivalry, calm, gentle, helpful, smart, determinate, fearless and unquestioning loyal to his operator. Commandman did sacrifice himself for his operator before and will probably do it again if need. He's also more mature and more responsibility than his two partners (more than his partners doesn’t mean good!) but after all he’s not more than a teen boy so he still showed his childishness and can get lost. He will always remind his operator what he have to do and quite strict with him to the point of nasty.

Commandman appeared as Planman’s big brother, he always tries to protect and take cares his little brother. Strangely despite being strict to his operator, Commandman seems to indulge his sibling a lot. It’s Commandman who taught Planman how to fight with sword though it has mix result. As a senior of the two the golden navi can actually give orders and force Planman to obey him, yet such cases are rare since Planman considered it as bully him.

Commandman do fear ghost but not as worst as his brother. Obviously he tried to hide it to not lose face with Planman but it’s hard to keep his nerve while calming his brother.

Navi Skill: His name actually reflected his special skill, the skill of command. He can control viruses armies much like a general control the army. For example he's capable to fight proficiently (often along with his brother) while screaming to other lesser navis, survey the battlefield, directly control viruses armies (like RTS game!) nearby or summon more viruses himself and argues with his operator all at the same times.

However despite having such great capacity and authority Commandman more often than not failed miserably (much to his dismay) when doing his 2 most important tasks: remind Kiyatam what he have to do and keep his little brother from causing trouble! To make thing worse, Commandman almost always have to solve problems caused by the other two!

Navi Stat:
- Melee: A legendary swordsman he is. Commandman was considered as the greatest sword weirder in a whole GVN. He can even rival Colonel in sword fight. He tends to balances out between skill, strength and agility to win.
- Range: As contrast to close combat ability, Commandman not prefer range combat much. However his Broken Lance and Sonic Bomb often proved more than enough.
- Endurance: Due to his close combat focus, Commandman have very high endurance and can take much more punishment than his brother can.
- Stamina: Same like endurance, Commandman have high stamina to close in, fight and finish off his enemies.
- Agility: Commandman’s speed is balance. Yet he’s not excels for it, generally Commandman prefer to block or break incoming strikes outright rather than avoid them.

Navi Weapons:
-Gladius sword: Commandman primary weapons. It’s a beam sword. Commandman actually carry the sword instead of replace his hand like common navi. The sword is also capable to create Sonic Boom. The sword’s hilt hanging on his back when not use.
-Command sword: Commandman use this short sword (often with left hand) as the secondary weapon while he's using the main weapon, occasionally he can literally load the sword into his cannon and launch it toward the enemy. This sword’s hilt hanging on Commandman’s back. The Command sword served as his command badge and side arms.
-Broken Lance: Commandman replace his left hand with the cannon which shoot a lance like missile to the foe. He can control the lance like missile guide.

Special Attacks:
-Crushing Sword: Commandman ultimate attack, the attack can be use by overload Gladius sword and swing it to fling a huge energy wave toward the target. He can use this attack even without operator and can attack for 3 times before have to recharge. The attack consume very large amount of the navi’s energy.
-Virus Summon: At his name shake Commandman can singly command a large number of viruses. Commandman can also summon up to 10 Praetorian viruses himself per battle.
-Virus Controller: Commandman can take control a large number of viruses and lead them to battle, the way he control them are similar to playing RTS game, this skill is limited to 4800 individual units and applied only for GVN viruses.

 

[Scipio Africanus]

these equipments are usually used for searching

equipment ko đếm được.

and often gets in trouble

tại sao lại bỏ "in"?

Planman can’t take punishment like his brother can due to his less physical strength and much lighter armor.

thấy "weaker" cũng ổn

anyways, sửa tiếp đc nhiêu hay nhiêu:

Special Attacks:
-Crushing Sword: Commandman's ultimate attack, the attack can be used by overloading his Gladius and swinging it to fling a huge energy wave toward the target. He can even use this attack even without the/an operator and can attack for 3 times before have to be recharged. The attack consumes a very large amount of the navi’s energy.
-Virus Summon: As the name suggested, Commandman can commands a huge number of viruses. To add to that, he can summon up 10 Praetorian viruses to aid him in each battle.
-Virus Controller: This navi can control an army of viruses and lead them to battle, Commandman command the army the way we play RTS games. This skill is, however, limited to 4800 individuals and may applied for GVN viruses only.

 

[lop pho 2]

Nhầm chữ equipment @@
get in/into trouble nếu ko nhầm thì do hình như dạng đúng là get into trouble nên khi ghi get in trouble thấy ko quen nên tưởng sai. Để get trouble hay get into trouble cũng được, giống nhau . Ngoài ra còn có một nghĩa lóng của cụm get sb into trouble là làm em nào đó có bầu

 

[Scipio Africanus]

tớ là tớ ủng hộ cái nghĩa lóng đó....

 

[vietanh797]

Viết văn mà khô queo thì viết làm gì

Với lại dịch thoáng, viết thoáng n một hồi vẫn thành cái kiểu dịch sát nghĩa ra 0 à.

Nguyên tắc là văn Eng dùng cậu đơn tốt hơn câu đôi, ghép. Thực sự là ngay cả luận văn tiến sĩ vài ngìn trang cũng chả ai dùng nhiều câu đôi. Mắc bệnh dùng tiếng Việt rồi đấy, đọc tiếng Việt Nghe hay không có nghĩa người ta đọc tiếng Anh tương tự sẽ thấy hay

 

[lop pho 2]

Vì câu đơn khó dùng hơn câu ghép, nói cách khác như khi dùng chữ Hán Việt ấy, câu ngắn, xúc tích và cô đọng, tuy vậy câu đơn không có nghĩa là câu đơn giản, câu ngắn nhưng từ hay, cấu trúc dùng được nhiều, đặc biệt cụm từ hay thành ngữ sẽ được đánh giá cao

 

[Scipio Africanus]

Theo cá nhân thì câu đơn trong tiếng Anh đọc nghe hay hơn, câu ghép/phức có khi gây khó hiểu, đọc khá mệt.

 

[vietanh797]

Vì câu đơn khó dùng hơn câu ghép, nói cách khác như khi dùng chữ Hán Việt ấy, câu ngắn, xúc tích và cô đọng, tuy vậy câu đơn không có nghĩa là câu đơn giản, câu ngắn nhưng từ hay, cấu trúc dùng được nhiều, đặc biệt cụm từ hay thành ngữ sẽ được đánh giá cao

thực ra ko phải khó mà là câu đơn nó ít khả năng mắc lỗi hơn, deduction merit system mà

 

[nhinhonhinho]

^ Thế thì các lão chuyển sang câu đơn dùm ta càng tốt, ne

Đố các tềnh iêu biết tại sao ta để con navi kia có thể điều khiển max 4800 virus =/= ?

 

[[Rest In Peace] Panzerklein]

Cái Rome 2, có ai có mod tăng gấp đôi số army có thể tạo không?

 

[lop pho 2]

thực ra ko phải khó mà là câu đơn nó ít khả năng mắc lỗi hơn, deduction merit system mà

cơ mà đơn giản quá thì ko có điểm sếp ạ :), kiểu như chỉ dùng 1 kiểu cấu trúc, một nhóm từ lặp đi lặp lại, một số thì, ko có cấu trúc đảo ngữ, v.v... thì cũng thấp = thằng xài nhiều mà sai tạm tạm ( sai ko quá lố)

 

[choidep123]

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[Kronpas1997]

Special Attacks:
-Crushing Sword: Commandman's ultimate attack, the attack can be used by overloading his Gladius and swinging it to fling a huge energy wave towards the target. He can even use this attack even without the/an operator and can attack for 3 times before having to recharge. The attack consumes a very large amount of the navi’s energy.
-Virus Summon: As the name suggested, Commandman can commands a huge number of viruses. To add to thatIn addition, he can summon up 10 Praetorian viruses to aid him in each battle.
-Virus Controller: This navi can control an army of viruses and lead them to battle, Commandman commands the army the way we play RTS games. This skill is, however, limited to 4800 individuals and may applied for apply to GVN viruses only.

Sửa rồi vẫn nhiều lỗi vụn vặt quá. Còn cái đoạn to đùng ở trên thì lười đọc.

edit 1:

^ Thế thì các lão chuyển sang câu đơn dùm ta càng tốt, ne

Giờ mới để ý, thêm ne sau mỗi câu là kiểu nói của đàn bà/trẻ em gái. Bắt chước anime à

edit 2: chúc mừng năm mới.

 

[vietanh797]

cơ mà đơn giản quá thì ko có điểm sếp ạ :), kiểu như chỉ dùng 1 kiểu cấu trúc, một nhóm từ lặp đi lặp lại, một số thì, ko có cấu trúc đảo ngữ, v.v... thì cũng thấp = thằng xài nhiều mà sai tạm tạm ( sai ko quá lố)

tùy hệ thống chấm điểm
deduction merit system là trừ điểm theo lỗi nói cách khác là khi bắt đầu bài thi dù bạn chưa làm gì bạn đã luôn có sẵn full mark và cứ lỗi thì bị trừ điểm

 

[Scipio Africanus]

Chúc mừng năm mới!..............................

 

[tqd16]

Chúc mừng năm mới phát.

 

[nhinhonhinho]

Happy new year!

Ps. Dang xai dt 0 viet co dau dc

 

[lop pho 2]

-None can rival my sword! => thiết nghĩ nên nothing nghe có vẻ hợp hơn: không gì sánh được với thanh kiếm của ta chứ không ai nghe kì kì.
-I told you not to causemake trouble isn’t it[:s]didn't I!?
A medium size navi, tough and muscularnavi
Wear a golden Roman’s style armor style
since it helps them to contact with the other and operator
-Eyes: emerald green eyes. Turn red when beign anger angry.
He has many trails of knight: chivalry, calm, gentle, helpful, smart, determinate, fearless and unquestioning loyalty to his operator (not sure)
Commandman did sacrificed (để như cũ cũng được nhưng thấy nhấn mạnh vậy ko cần thiết) himself for his operator before and will probably do it again if need necessary
He's also more mature and more responsible than his two partners (more than his partners which doesn’t mean it's good!
He will is always reminding his operator of what he have to do and quite strict with him to the nasty points of nasty.

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tùy hệ thống chấm điểm
deduction merit system là trừ điểm theo lỗi nói cách khác là khi bắt đầu bài thi dù bạn chưa làm gì bạn đã luôn có sẵn full mark và cứ lỗi thì bị trừ điểm

Nghe nói còn có hệ thống sai là phạt điểm, kiểu đúng là được x điểm nhưng sai ko những được điểm câu đó còn trừ lui , để tránh đánh bừa

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Tái bút: Chúc mừng năm mới .

 

[naq29]

 

[vietanh797]

Chúc mừng năm mới .