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CyberTuxedo
Mega Man
If you read both 9gag and haivl, it's painfully obvious how much we are lagging behind as a culture. Call yourself a 4000-year culture as much as you want but while 9gag is full of mindblown information and witty jokes; haivl is full of dirty jokes and copypasta
http://www.reddit.com/r/4chan/comments/zacju/9gag_repost_machine_explained/
At least don't complaint about copypasta.
At least don't complaint about copypasta.
Well, it's just right if we share the good things, meaningful readings, useful softwares and knowledge,Sir. but if internet was used for sharing bullshit, it would be...
CyberTuxedo
Mega Man
Excuse me, can i ask for corect writing IELTS here?I study by myself so i don't have teacher,my Enlish is very bad and i want to improve it. Because of some personal reason so i can't study at English center.I just need a one who can point my error, no need to be a master or a profreesional.It's alright if you can't help.Thank you very much :) .
PS : Do i have somthing wrong in thẽ post over?
PS : Do i have somthing wrong in thẽ post over?
I'm afraid no, sorry guy, this box seems to become freezy again and every one is busy with their lives
Whatsoever I think you need to look for an English expert or at least some decent writing guide books.
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Whatsoever I think you need to look for an English expert or at least some decent writing guide books.
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this is my checking. I can't guarantee the accuracy of my post due to my shit English level.
Thank you for checking my post. :)
Charlie Scene
Legend of Zelda
Dat rat race to the apex of corporate ladder
life is so exciting and wondrous at every corner 10/10 would reincarnate
life is so exciting and wondrous at every corner 10/10 would reincarnate
CyberTuxedo
Mega Man
Just ask, i think people still lurk this place (at least i still do), it's just that we don't find it neccessary to post anything until we find something interesting to share, and even in that case we don't often share it here since we can enjoy a much wider range of audience elsewhere (Facebook for example). This is pretty much an elite club where we enjoy civilised, meaningful talks and wicked sarcasm (guys pls don't bash me for this lol). But troubles and questions are always welcomed here (since nothing is going on here and we are all expecting something sth tp talk about tbh lol)
Your reading is quite ok actually, most people i know don't even use English wiki (or wiki for that matter)
Btw idk whether it's due to the deprivation of sleep or the deterioration of my english but while writing this post this post i had to paused several times to ponder whether i wrote corect english
This is the first time i wrote this,i study by myself so hope you can check it,honestly please.I am very very grateful who can help me.
Finding it hard to remember important facts and figures?Improve you memory in 10 weeks with our Memory course.Places are limited and the course is available for only a short time.
Apply writing to:
You see the above advertisement for a course designed to improve your memory.Write a letter to the arganisers of the course.In the letter:
- Give some backround information about yourself.
- Explain your own problems and why you would like to do the course
- Enquire about the methods used on the course
- Enquire about course fees and dates.
You should write at least 150 words.You do not need to write addresses.
Here is my writing test,task 1
Finding it hard to remember important facts and figures?Improve you memory in 10 weeks with our Memory course.Places are limited and the course is available for only a short time.
Apply writing to:
You see the above advertisement for a course designed to improve your memory.Write a letter to the arganisers of the course.In the letter:
- Give some backround information about yourself.
- Explain your own problems and why you would like to do the course
- Enquire about the methods used on the course
- Enquire about course fees and dates.
You should write at least 150 words.You do not need to write addresses.
Here is my writing test,task 1
Chỉnh sửa cuối:
Nah, your English is still extremly excellent, you just sometimes feel like not have enough concentration because of lack of sleeping or healthy problem. I'm not flattering anway.Btw idk whether it's due to the deprivation of sleep or the deterioration of my english but while writing this post this post i had to paused several times to ponder whether i wrote corect english
And about my little English improving, it thanks to your help, Mr. Fat Cat and bro I.K
This is my stupid idea, I just try to fix error, not change the way you wrote, but I think you'd better to learn how to have a decent writing.
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This is my stupid idea, I just try to fix error, not change the way you wrote, but I think you'd better to learn how to have a decent writing.
Thank you so mụch, i will remember this :)
CyberTuxedo
Mega Man
To whom it may concern (to address the recipient of unknown gender)
My name is Nguyen, I’m 20 and I'm living in HCM city.I have read your advertisement about the memory improve course. I have problem with time and number, I can’t remember many numbers at once, for example when my friend give me their phone numberbut I can’t remember all of them, I feel that the sequence is too long. The other problem is time, sometimes I forget what day of the week today is, it was Monday but I thought it was
Sunday, today is friday but I thought it Saturday.It’s
too difficulty to live like this.
Fortunately, I saw this advertisement so I write this
letter to you.Can you tell me what is the method you
use in the course? Physicially or psychology?I think it
doesn’t matter if you can help me.How about the
course fees?Is it expensive?When the course
organize?And how long the course take place?
Please reply me when you receive this letter.
Thank you
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My name is Nguyen, I’m 20 and I'm living in HCM city.I have read your advertisement about the memory improve course. I have problem with time and number, I can’t remember many numbers at once, for example when my friend give me their phone number
Sunday, today is friday but I thought it Saturday.It’s
too difficulty to live like this.
Fortunately, I saw this advertisement so I write this
letter to you.Can you tell me what is the method you
use in the course? Physicially or psychology?I think it
doesn’t matter if you can help me.How about the
course fees?Is it expensive?When the course
organize?And how long the course take place?
Please reply me when you receive this letter.
Thank you
Still editing
Here is my new Task 1.Can anyone check it?It took me an hour to wrote this (very noob)...
IELTS Writing Task 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The graph below shows the changes in maximum number of Asian elephants between 1994 and 2007.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
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I know, my English is so bad. I think if i write that letter by Vietnamese, it will be like that.
Thank you for editing my post.
IELTS Writing Task 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The graph below shows the changes in maximum number of Asian elephants between 1994 and 2007.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
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I know, my English is so bad. I think if i write that letter by Vietnamese, it will be like that.
Thank you for editing my post.
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Here is my new Task 1.Can anyone check it?It took me an hour to wrote this (very noob)...
IELTS Writing Task 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The graph below shows the changes in maximum number of Asian elephants between 1994 and 2007.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
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I know, my English is so bad. I think if i write that letter by Vietnamese, it will be like that.
Thank you for editing my post.
Where did you get the mutation thing from?! And there are careless mistakes like "elephents". You really should read your essays again and attempt to remove all those spelling mistakes before posting it here asking people to correct them for you.
Thank you vẻy much, i will careful :)