General Talk

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Navi Quote:
-None can rival my sword!
-WAKE UP Kiyatam-kun (screaming)!
-I told you not to cause trouble isn’t it!?

Navi Type: Light

Navi Sex: Male

Navi Appearance: A medium size navi, tough and muscular. Wear a golden Roman’s style armor which covered his chest, his jumpsuit is black. His helmet also has a Roman’s style with tall red feathered ridge at the center, the front pad of the ridge homed his control center and radar to command viruses. The front pad of the helmet spotted another rectangular pad which is a signal catcher like any other navi (vital for any navi since it help them to contact with the other and operator). He also wears red coat which can somewhat reduce impact of coming strikes. Commandman is equipped with air-shoes to enhance his mobility.
-Hair: dark and short. Have 2 sticks hair poked out at the end of his helmet.
-Eyes: emerald green eyes. Turn red when anger.
-Symbol: image.

Navi personality: Commandman is Kiyatam's best friend, able to share bond, feeling and harmony with his operator. He has many trails of knight: chivalry, calm, gentle, helpful, smart, determinate, fearless and unquestioning loyal to his operator. Commandman did sacrifice himself for his operator before and will probably do it again if need. He's also more mature and more responsibility than his two partners (more than his partners doesn’t mean good!) but after all he’s not more than a teen boy so he still showed his childishness and can get lost. He will always remind his operator what he have to do and quite strict with him to the point of nasty.

Commandman appeared as Planman’s big brother, he always tries to protect and take cares his little brother. Strangely despite being strict to his operator, Commandman seems to indulge his sibling a lot. It’s Commandman who taught Planman how to fight with sword though it has mix result. As a senior of the two the golden navi can actually give orders and force Planman to obey him, yet such cases are rare since Planman considered it as bully him.

Commandman do fear ghost but not as worst as his brother. Obviously he tried to hide it to not lose face with Planman but it’s hard to keep his nerve while calming his brother.

Navi Skill: His name actually reflected his special skill, the skill of command. He can control viruses armies much like a general control the army. For example he's capable to fight proficiently (often along with his brother) while screaming to other lesser navis, survey the battlefield, directly control viruses armies (like RTS game!) nearby or summon more viruses himself and argues with his operator all at the same times.

However despite having such great capacity and authority Commandman more often than not failed miserably (much to his dismay) when doing his 2 most important tasks: remind Kiyatam what he have to do and keep his little brother from causing trouble! To make thing worse, Commandman almost always have to solve problems caused by the other two!

Navi Stat:
- Melee: A legendary swordsman he is. Commandman was considered as the greatest sword weirder in a whole GVN. He can even rival Colonel in sword fight. He tends to balances out between skill, strength and agility to win.
- Range: As contrast to close combat ability, Commandman not prefer range combat much. However his Broken Lance and Sonic Bomb often proved more than enough.
- Endurance: Due to his close combat focus, Commandman have very high endurance and can take much more punishment than his brother can.
- Stamina: Same like endurance, Commandman have high stamina to close in, fight and finish off his enemies.
- Agility: Commandman’s speed is balance. Yet he’s not excels for it, generally Commandman prefer to block or break incoming strikes outright rather than avoid them.

Navi Weapons:
-Gladius sword: Commandman primary weapons. It’s a beam sword. Commandman actually carry the sword instead of replace his hand like common navi. The sword is also capable to create Sonic Boom. The sword’s hilt hanging on his back when not use.
-Command sword: Commandman use this short sword (often with left hand) as the secondary weapon while he's using the main weapon, occasionally he can literally load the sword into his cannon and launch it toward the enemy. This sword’s hilt hanging on Commandman’s back. The Command sword served as his command badge and side arms.
-Broken Lance: Commandman replace his left hand with the cannon which shoot a lance like missile to the foe. He can control the lance like missile guide.

Special Attacks:
-Crushing Sword: Commandman's ultimate attack, the attack can be used by overloading his Gladius and swinging it to fling a huge energy wave towards the target. He can use this attack even without an operator and can attack for 3 times before having to recharge. The attack consumes a very large amount of the navi’s energy.
-Virus Summon: As the name suggested, Commandman can commands a huge number of viruses. In addition, he can summon up 10 Praetorian viruses to aid him in each battle.
-Virus Controller: This navi can control an army of viruses and lead them to battle, Commandman commands the army the way we play RTS games. This skill is, however, limited to 4800 individuals and may apply to GVN viruses only.
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Navi Quote:
- Target locked! D rifle fully charged! Fire!
- One chance is all I need!
- Ne ne! Commandman nii-chan!

Navi Type: Dark

Navi Sex: Male

Navi Appearance: Slightly smaller than Commandman, about the same size as Rockman.exe. He wears a black jumpsuit along with dark green amour. Planman's helmet has an antenna and a visor on the left, on the other side there is a microphone, these equipment are usually used for searching, hacking, communicating…. Frontally, there is a rectangular pad which acts as a signal receiver like on any other navi. Beside that, Planman also wears a backpack storing his various documents, data, programs and other stuffs. He also has the built in air-shoes to greatly improve his agility and speed.
~Hair: Dark, mostly covered by the helmet.
~Eyes: Emerald green identical to Commandman’s.
~Symbol: …

Navi personality: Opposite to Commandman, Planman is actually a (cute) little demon. He’s truly a trouble maker, he is also rather evil, ruthless, reckless and, however, very childish, though, he’s still a good guy. Being a very independent navi, he basically listens to no one, even his operator's or his brother's words are merely good advice.

Planman does hold his loyalty to his Netops despite the fact that they keep shouting, teasing and arguing everyday (actually, whenever possible). Also, that the Netops always calls him 'kid' and treats him as one makes them fight even more often. Yet they actually get along well (especially when causing trouble) and are ready to sacrifice for each other.

Planman is very close to his brother because Commandman always protectes, indulges and takes care of him, Planman even prefers to listen to his brother rather than his operator.

Unlike his ‘fearless’ and ‘flawless’ brother Commandman (in Planman's point of view), Planman have some weaknesses, he's scared of ghosts or scary things (demons!), despite being a dark navi himself. Planman doesn’t like close combat which is his weakness. His weakness in close combat also makes him scare (and hate) Swordie and Bladia.

Navi skill: Due to the fact that he excels at range combat along with his speed and being a peerless sniper makes him an excellent marksman, scout and hunter. Planman is also very intelligent (even surpasses Commandman), enabling him to make, adapt and execute plans very effectively (as his name suggested) plus the ability to hack and break virtually anything. However, he often ignores the orders since his recklessness overmatches his intelligence!

Navi Stats:
-Melee: This can be seen as his weakness! Planman lacks his brother skill in close-combat. He does carry a sword but he is not good with it and often gets in trouble when using the sword to fight. Planman only has basic skills in sword fighting and uses it exclusively for defense unless his opponent is much weaker than him or when he's performing Twin Gladius technique with Commandman. Anyway his sword fighting skill has improved a bit recently after having been trained by Commandman.
-Range: In contrary to his melee skill, Planman is one among the best shooters. Any opponent that enters his range is guaranteed to get shot into pieces even before they know where he is.
-Endurance: He’s a tough navi but he ain't that tough. Planman can’t take punishment like his brother can due to his lesser physical strength and much lighter armor.
-Stamina: Planman has no outstanding feature in his stamina.
-Agility: Planman was originally created to be a hunter, a scout and a sniper so he has the speed and the agility and, moreover, to compensate for his weak endurance.

Navi's Weapon:
-D rifle: A rifle which replaces his right hand when used. It can fire at long distance and has a scope. This is Planman's main weapon. The rifle can fire in two modes:
1. Single shot mode: This’s a standard mode. The gun fires a violet beam with extreme accuracy and is effective at any range. When fully charged it can in one hand unleash 6 beams at once with each beam being twice as strong as the normal attack, on the other hand the shot can be concentrated into one large beam which is 12 times more powerful than the normal shot.
2. Automatic mode: This alternative mode throws hails of small busters into the enemy at the rate of fire of 500 rounds per minute.
-V pistol: the gun hanging on his back. This is Planman's side arms. It can fire either single shots or burst. Its power is similar to D rifle but with much shorter range. Planman use it in close range.
-Gladius sword: Identical to Commandman's sword.

Special weapon:
-Dark Scythes: Ultimate Planman's attack. By overloading the D rifle, Planman can unleash a huge violet beam that can blast away almost anything. Its strength is equal to the power of program advance. This attack requires a lot of energy which makes the navi tire out quickly if he's using it without operator's chips. Kiyatam prohibits Planman from using this attack more than 3 times when he’s fighting independently.
-Dark Shadow: Planman can ‘summon’ two of his shadows to fight with him. These shadows are somewhat immune to damage and last for 30 seconds before disappearing. These shadows always carry D rifles and have half Planman's attack power.
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These above are my friend's description of his favorite characters. We DID help him to correct errors but we couldn't guarantee it's absolutely exact. So I'll be very grateful for your help :)
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P/S: Although we had helped him to fix those mistake but I don't know if he found out and corrected them all so...please pardon me about stupid "elephant flaws"
 
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Note:

1.Those desc above are my fictional characters and based in the Rockman/Megaman.exe universe. More info of the universe is here
http://megaman.wikia.com/wiki/Mega_Man_Battle_Network_(series)

2.The Characters here are the entities called Net Navi
http://megaman.wikia.com/wiki/NetNavi

And here are their artwork (and sample)
Commandman.exe
http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2013/241/b/f/commandman_exe_by_nhinhonhinho-d6k5qit.jpg

Planman.exe
http://th07.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2014/013/7/7/navi_sketch_by_ick25-d722ssa.jpg
 
Yeah but I did used Word's checks when typing them and they are grammar and spelling free according to Word!
 
There's more where that comes from :-"

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P/S: hey this box isn't so dead, probably just too many introverts =))
 
CyberTuxedo nói:
There's more where that comes from :-"

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P/S: hey this box isn't so dead, probably just too many introverts =))
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This box is a beautiful place to ambush =)).
Everyone lurks in the darkness and waits for some novices( or victims) appearing and....

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sometimes somebody pretends to post something non sense to lure targets to the trap.
 
it seems noone has any crap to tell about. Let's break the ice. it's too quite here, it sucks, doesn't it?
 
I know a spammer with 14k posts. So yes, 2468 posts and still got pounded for spamming is completely reasonable. :))
 
Just looked at my post count and felt so embarrassed for having been here for more than a decade =)).
 
I used to "post" 50 posts per day. But it got boring. If I could merge all the clones I have and revive all topics that were wiped, I think I could go to more than 10k. But it's still inferior to people like Xenogear, Ranza or Kinas....
 
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